Mrs Millard’s Literacy group have been creating their own ‘Magic Box’ poems inspired by the poet Kit Wright.
If we had our own Magic Box, what would we put into it? This also links to our whole school theme of ‘Who Do You Think You Are.’
We thought about smells, tastes and sounds that we like, special places, memories, beautiful and imaginary things, as well as some nonsense items.
We are so proud of ourselves that we wanted to share our masterpieces with you. Even if you are not in Mrs Millard’s Literacy group, please comment on our poems and also tell us what you would put into your special ‘Magic Box.’
i will put in my box…..
a Lego golden ninja with a sword and moshi monsters .a lings primary logo and
a football card in,harry potters wand to make spells and a green lantern ring.
Thank you for being the first to blog Mazahir – we’ll blog more of our poems tomorrow
well done Mazahiar for being the first purson to blog!
Well done
This was an amazing piece of work that we did in the class and the children came up with some amazing descriptive words and ideas for their boxes so I was inspired tonight to write my ideas down too!
I will put in my magic box…
A diamanté stiletto heel slipping and gliding in a pool of jelly
Whizzing sunsets morphing into a delicious rocket lollipop
Multicoloured wigs skipping, dancing and laughing in the playground
Snow angels holding hands
A gigantic jade Buddha crushing and stamping out war zones all over the world
Boba Fett dancing a jive
The purr of a sleepy tiger
A cuddly zombie covered in magic laughing dust blowing kisses at me
My sisters tear and lock of her hair
Aurora Borealis singing jazz tunes as it mingles and skips in the dark skies
The crisp cold moon howling at the streets below
Leonardo da Vinci’s sketches coming to life and telling his secrets
In my box I shall bathe in an orange chocolate river splashing smarties whilst looking up at the shiny mirror ball watching the crystal reflections of my families faces and distant memories gone by
My box will be fashioned from Aztec Murials and ancient steel bolts the keyhole will be protected by a Phoenix who will fire flame anyone who intrudes upon it. The foot posts are formed from Mexican sugar skulls dipped from dragons breath. It can only be opened by the secret words upon my voice.
some good ideas mrs sullvan. and alot.
Gosh Mrs Sullivan – a poet in the making!!
Well done miss sullivan
Cheers I learnt a lot in our lesson everyone’s done soooo well ;-). 🙂
I love yours Mrs sulliven, some creative ideas! Some words we might need to look up. My favrote line was, In my box i shall bathe in a orange choclate river.
Thank you, what’s your most favourite line in your own poem then and why??? 😉
Which words did you get stuck on Amber? Maybe you could searc google or I’ll let you know.
I will put into my box a place called hevan where my nan lives so high in the sky a giant cant reach it.
What a powerful line Thomas – well done!
Magic Box
I will put into the box…
the beat of a hart feels like the beat of the music.
I love this line Ashia
i will put in my box…… the hot weells ligthing mqueen going round and round the race track.
i will put in my box…
I can hear jj screaming at the amzaing spiderman.we can see robin van perise scooreing a rough goal.
i will put in my box…
we can see robin van perise scoreing 4 times in the goal
i will put in my box…
a vibrating gutiar breaking someones teeth.
i will put in my box
a long place in pakistan make me sleepy.
i will put in my box …
my uncle playing cricket with me and meesum
my box is fashioned from…
the outside is made of diamonds and golden stars.i have a lock that can open and close.when you open the box a jack in box pops out.my lock has a security lazaers hahahahah
You’ve been busy Mazahir!
i will put into the box…
the sound of popping fireworks scearinng me on bonfire night.
my box is made owt of golden solid rok in side my box is made owt of skeloton bones.
Lovely ideas Corey
Lovely line Corey!
i will put into my box..
creeping intothe liveingroomwhen your parents are asleep and you sneekaly go and watch tv.
grate finkin asher.
thank you riley!
I wonder…
Do you sneakily do this alder easy? I won’t tell
Already i mean
I will put into my box
The taste of popcorn crunching in my mouth as I chewie cracks my tooth-ouch!
i will put in my box a blue and black spottytiger who squeeks and spits popcorn at you
This made me laugh Aden!
I will put in my box…
A tumbling pile of hot meat balls.
I will put in my box…
Miss Trunchball locked in the chokey.
I will put in my box …Santa’s reindeers with their bells jingling in my head.
I will put on my box diamonds and bronze and golld.
The hinges will be made of skleton bones and diamonds.
The inside will be as soft as gorilia fur.
when you open it, it will come to life.
i like them lucie-lea.
I like the idea of your box coming to life!
Fantastic ideas Lucie-Lea.
magic box
I will put in my box twuliy twix melting in my mowth.
thickw strawbery sauce driping down my hand from my ranbow woff con.delish donuts with coloured sprincois covering my lipse.
I will put in my box the snowy sparcls of a chineys dragns bref on a boling day.choclot carmel donuts dvawering in my mouth.swirle twerle minty crim watering in my mouth.
very good idas riley. and delichos
Magic bOX
i will put into my magic box
a silver sparkling star that kicks my away.bad dreams away.
i will put into my box…
a chingling shiny braslot glowing in the dark saving all my magical memores.
well done blessing.
i will put in my box the sound of children laghing in class.
A litte bit more
Magic box
I will put into my box…
a place called Hevan where my nan lives so high in the sky a giant cant reach it.
i will put into my box
a human x box and it plays amazing games.
i will put into my box..
a dancer on a police car and a police oficer on a dance floor.
when you open my box a disco light pops out and plays celebrate good times come on. while it explodes with glittery fire!
I will put in my box
Exploded bouling flames from a burnt bomd fire. My xbox console playing zombies arcade! The smell melted fudge in the wrapper. My box is fashioned from
The lock and hinges are made of t-rex claws to open it you must scan your finger over the lazer. My box is covered in gold, bronze and silver metalic paint, you must wear super strong sunglases to hold it!
the first one is very funny hahahahahah!
sorry i thoght the dancer on a police car and a police oficer on the dance floor was the first one i gess i need glassis:(
I will put into the box
my kettering bedroom filed with princess toys and squishiy make up
dust
Why
dont forget your full stop.
charlotte’s magic box.
I will put into the box.
The tast of gooey pink marshmllow melting in my mouth as it stick’s to my teeth.
Fragrant daisies as I weave them into daisy chains.
The sound of quiet as it make’s me feel happy.
WOW I LOVE IT
charlotte I like your poem especilly when you said about the marshmellow melting in your mouth.
wow morenike are you in mrs millards group and fab work you did chorlotte.
That you
that you what?
the lock is two goldn teeth from a crocadiel.the inside is full of magic boms.the outside is glas and lazers.
i like that .
i will put into my box
I would lock rude nasty Mrs trunchball in the chokey and never let her get out.
WOW MOLLY IF YOU PUT MATILDA IN THE CHOKEY I WOULD SWAP HER TO MRS TRUNCHBALL.
i will put into my box…
the taste of sour lemon in my mouth as i pull a face.
Mrs Millard’s Magic Box
I will put into the box
The sound of Father Christmas’ sleigh bells jangling on a snowy Christmas Eve night,
The fragrant smell of freshly mown grass on a lazy summers day
Nan’s sweet, singing voice in her soft Welsh accent
I will put into the box
The mouth-watering aroma of just cooked bacon wafting up the stairs
The ear-splitting bang of the Catherine Wheel on Bonfire Night
White, fluffy clouds galloping across the sky on a windy afternoon
I will put into the box
The eerie yet peaceful sound of silence as only my thoughts speak to me
The sound of children laughing out loud as they build sandcastles on the scorching beach
Snow that’s warm to touch and a four day weekend
I really like it because you used some of the ideas your engilish group has well done!
whoa Mrs Sullivan that is lots of work I don’t know what to say
holly its mrs millards work 🙂
I like that you put your memories into your poem to and it’s got lots of variety too! Yet another poet in the making!
Can’t wait to see what we are up to in Y4 next term. 🙂
Well done
Miss millerd I got the roing name
Well done
Belinda is think
is it 3D
is it wood
is it sometime you can put some suple
what I will put in my box is chocolate melting in my mouth like liquid and it will tickle my mouth
What I would put in is healthy food and all the fruit mixed together will tast juciy like tropical fruit jucie
I love that
I will put into my box.
A taste’s of leon tingl in my mouth as I eat it.
My bed room because my cat’s was boun in my bed room.
A pen because I like drowing.
My dsing.
It will have a lovehat and it will be puppl
I will put in my box…
the smell of pizza cooking in the oven
i will put into my box…
a choclate callinder and myself as i put myself in the box i will think about my frends and family.
i will put into the box…
mike from monsters inc and a moshi monster.
i will put into my box…
my family and frends.
my box is fashond by silver and black diamonds.
my hinges are made of crushed gold.
my lock is made of pure iron and cole.
if you touch the box you will revece an eletrick shock.
I will put inside my box…
jewels and glitter evrywere
A litte bit more
i will put in my box…
my teksta eating his bone with the pink teksta and watch a movie.
i will put in my box…..
a snail that said slow snail oh right .
i will put in my box….
people screaming MOSHI MONSTERS vs BINWEEVILS.
i will put into the box…
me scraching my head as i think.
i will put in my box…..
sponge-bob make yummmy krabby patties .
i will put in my box….
skylanders swap force being silly
i will put into my box
a mega zord from power rangers and lighting sword .
i will put in my box…….
spongebob doing his dance and warm ups.
I will put into my box,
The look of flower’s make’s me upset because my grandad Is dea and there was flower’s.(:
i like that poem 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
He would be proud of you and your poems too. Perhaps you could dedicate a poem to him.
i will put into my box…
a scary movie as i close my eyes as it freaks me out 🙁 so scary aaaaa.
my mum’s box is made of pure gold iron.
i will put into my box…
every singel club and teacher in the whole school.
my box is fashond by all the teachers and the whole school.
i will put into my box…
all of the teachers you know why i put them into box they are very speashol and every body is aswell it just they work sooooooooo hard to help us learn.
Ahhhhhhh – thank you Ashia
i will put god in my box.
My box is made from golden sonic’s! The side’s are made from Dairy milk melting! The hinges are made of goblin’s toenails!
I will put in my box halloween monsters
I will put in my box iron man (Tony Stark)happy halloween alrea
dy 10 TRICK OR TREATERS
I will put in my box thunder and thor!
I will put in my box >The Avengers, fantastic four , gurdians of the galaxy, howard the duck, devil dino, groot, S.H.E.I.L.D, S.W.O.R.D, A.I.M, spider man, nova, white tiger, power man, iron fist, black widow, ant man and wasp, hulk, red hulk, Rick, skaar, she-hulk (agents of S.M.A.S.H), FALCON, war machine, X man, superman, batman and robin, mr. stretch! (have to go to bed now)
Thank you for blogging Sahib – it’s good to hear from people other than my Literacy group. It’s quite late so maybe best that you get some rest!
My box is made from golden sonic’s! The side’s are made from Dairy milk melting! The hinges are made of goblin’s toenails!
I will put in my box halloween monsters
I will put in my box iron man (Tony Stark)happy halloween alrea
dy 10 TRICK OR TREATERS
I will put in my box thunder and thor!
I will put in my box >The Avengers, fantastic four , gurdians of the galaxy, howard the duck, devil dino, groot, S.H.E.I.L.D, S.W.O.R.D, A.I.M, spider man, nova, white tiger, power man, iron fist, black widow, ant man and wasp, hulk, red hulk, Rick, skaar, she-hulk (agents of S.M.A.S.H), FALCON, war machine, X man, superman, batman and robin, mr. stretch! (have to go to bed now!!!!!!!)
I will put in my astro-phisic metallic box my Xbox and my Xbox video game’s > Oddworld Munch’s Oddysee,Rayman 3 Hoodlum havoc,Scaler!
my box is made out of rotten fur