Out of this World

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Oh my gosh – you come across an opening in the ground and you wonder to yourself what is this? Shall I go inside?  You use your instinct to wander towards it.  What happens next is your tale to tell…

Remember to tell us all about what you encounter;

•Your experience as you walk inside the opening
•How you are feeling
•Your senses – touch, see, smell, hear & taste
•Do you decide to leave the new found world or come back to reality?
•Do you meet any strange creatures, make friends or enemies?

The person with the most original and unusual tale that is truly ‘Out of this World’ will become the proud winner of our ‘Blogging Contest’. Prizes are on offer!!

Enjoy your creative story writing and most importantly – have fun!

Mrs Millard and Mrs Sullivan  :-)

90 thoughts on “Out of this World

  1. Zig zagging across the sun beams of light escaping the tall statuesque branches of the ancient oak trees, my foot hits a block on the floor, I peer forward and see that there’s a dug out stone wall leading to a rather odd tunnel. I stop and wonder to myself ‘what an earth is this doing in the middle of the woods, who put it here, where does it lead, mmmm?’ My inquisitiveness takes over, as my heart races I jump into the pit, the branches crack and crunch as I step over them, my out reached hands touch the cold, damp brick walls which are now towering above my head, I can no longer see the trees as I look up just the white fluffy sky stares back at me. As I nervously take each step, there is a eerie silence all around, is this a gentle warning from the woods not to go inside? I reply to myself “come on Sullie don’t be so silly it’s only a tunnel” So I bravely continue forward. I noticed that the archway has some letters carved at the top (caveat viator) I know this is Latin but can’t quiet remember in English what it means so I ignore it and head into the pitch black tunnel there’s no door the cracked twigs are no longer heard, instead I step into a sludgy substance the air is full of a damp mossy stench and all I can hear is my sludgy footsteps sucking and slurping as I take each step forward, as I look up I see a distant light flickering, the nerves wear off now and my body starts to relax a little. The warm air surrounds my body like a blankets and seems to push me the smell of moss is disappearing the light becomes a shower of multicoloured stars lazer beaming me to step inside this new world, closing my eyes I head directly into the rainbow lazer lights! Oh my goodness the ground starts to tremble and quiver beneath me I jump on top of what seems like a flying letter as I jump onto It, it screeches out the letter Sound “r” I jump again trying to maintain my balance and sometimes nervously flapping my arms like a bird looking rather ridiculous again another letter sound screeches aloud “d”. This makes me giggle and I jump from letter to letter having an amazing time. Until I come to the end there’s an enormous gap in the letters as I peer up there’s a flock of tiny birds flying in the sky, they notice I’m standing on the letter and swoop towards me, wait a minute. I scream aloud “aghhhhh” as the little bird became a pterodactyl dinosaur swooping down he has a terrifying sharp beak and deep blood red spider web wings he pokes me off the letter, as I free dive toward what seems like an vast ocean, he circles back round and catches me on his back and glides through the air. This is amazing at first I was terrified now I’m just looking and taking in the strange sights of this outstanding unusual world. There are trees growing out of the deep dark water that have brightly coloured fruits on them, black and white knife and forks jumping out of the water trying to poke them off. As the pterodactyl skims the water i look up the letters are still floating high above us, there is no sun just a lazer filled sky which I saw at the end of the tunnel. There’s an Aztec pryamid in the distance with glowing flowers surrounding it, the bird flicks me off his back and I land at the bottom of the pyramid. Confused and a little startled. I hear a putter patter sound, what could be next? I giggle to myself as wooden drawing mannequins appear with flower head pieces. They try to talk with me but I don’t understand. Picking me up off the floor they drag me inside my feet are being dragged along the floor and my arms are hurting and I’m getting splinters from their wooden hands. I’m getting worried again now, do they mean me harm? “Go back, I go back” I call out and then I cry. The shock of the day is too much. I smell buring, it’s like a barbecue wood burner. Now I. Really scared all I can think about is those floating letters and the way home. This civilisation don’t seem friendly at all I think they are going to have me for dinner I need to escape. They’ve locked me in a cage and dance around me.. Just then the pterodactyl ones scream he’s his terrible song at them and crashes open the cage he gently places he sharp beak either side of my waist and picks me up flying up high in the sky. His breath stinks and reminds me off home, in particular my sons smelly, musky feet! I see the colourful letters again he places me back on the letters and to my surprise talks English to me ” you were warned not to come here now go home, quick be gone and never come back – be safe” jumping at a speedy pace back onto the letters who again speak. The lazer lights flash again I re- enter the dark tunnel, not bothering to walk but run in fear back into our world. Stepping into the woods and rubbing my eyes in dis-belief I decide nog not tell anyone of my rather eventful day it will be my secret. Travellers beware. Phew that was close

    • Wow! Well done Mrs Sullivan – a very impressive story. I know you are a valuable member of Team Terrific but I’m sorry to disappoint you – the prizes are for the children. :-(

      • Oh dear 😉 that’s ok Mrs Millard!
        Well all I can say is children at least it give you an idea into my sort of imaginary world!!
        Happy blogging everyone I’m very excited to see what your worlds are going to be like.
        PS don’t forget you can write it down first if you have a lot of text to add or even copy and paste from a word or pages document! :-) 😉 :-)

    • your right it is very well witten i love your imaginashont and i cant belve you always have an idier in your mind like you have done lodes now and lodes on year 3 blog

      you should be proawd of your self and very impressive :) ::) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

  2. When I approched the mythical tunnel, in my heart was excitment. Some beautiful unicorns greeted me. As i ran further into this mythical land, i felt the hand of Peter Pan! ” Wow were am i, it feels like another dimention!” I saw the Beast’s castle, Hundred acre wood, Peter’s hide away and Mickey’s clubhouse.The whole place smelled like spring! I felt awsome. I felt diamonds, flowers and a picture of the princesses. Then a super evil villian stormed in. There fell silenct. There name was Jafar. He wanted me because he thought i had magical powers. I ran as fast as i could but Jafar zapped me. My ankle hurted that much i could not run. Jafar was about to take me but all my disney friends helped me and conbined there powers together and killed all the villians there was. Then they granted me a wish. I shouted ” I wish i could go home!” So they sent me back home.
    THE END

  3. My would be mermaid world how you get there is you dig a hole put glitter or your favorite paint and jump inside then you will be in water but do not worry can breath because you have a tail you have become a mermaid if it is a girl you become a merprincess if it was a boy you become a merprince the color of the water is rainbow your is rainbow too.BECAUSE IT IS RAINBOW MERMAID WORLD you will have so much fun there is no dry land it is covered with water.To be continued

  4. When i jump down the hole there is a new world.Full of blocks the houses made of blocks are under ground with a above ground hotel for one as not many people visit.the people are blocks with a circle like head and they live under ground all the people are friends the two main people are the race car driver and the builder who builds things.To be continued.

  5. Upon a big hill lived a teenager called Rapunzel and one day she found another world……..Her evil grandmother looked after her and made her do all the chores.One day she found a tunnel under the floor and it lead to a little village with alot of very poor people who had very little money and couldnt go anywhere.Then it all changed…

  6. When i approched the mythical tunnel, I felt excited and frightened. Curiously i scrambled to the weird tunnel. Elutions messed with my head like a bunch of mind readers. Finally it was over. I stepped forward, i felt the hand of Peter Pan! Further i smelt pancakes, cookies and my favourate chocolate cake! Tiana greeted me with grace. Then Mickey Mouse lead me to his clubhouse and his friends greeted me.
    to be contiued

  7. One day they 6 people there names are Max, Sophie, Mya , Natasha charlotte Vicky they was on the beach and they was playing handball and the wold is called dim wold and

  8. i faind a cave inside there was a place called fun land because theres lots of rieds and cariters like peter pan and belle cinderealla snow whiet and disny chariturs there fravrute thing was chocltte cake my fravrut drink was hot choclert
    mikey mase let me in his clubhouse
    to be continued

  9. In the deep seaside of the city there was a super girl called Abbdab. She had lots of magical powers like acctaking eviel people. She had lots of missions like going to the forests and walking strangly and loopy. Meanwhile I go on a misssion and I pretend I am playing a trumpet not looking were I am going and I tripped over this brick and fall in this weired world……….To be continued!!!!!!

    • When I went down this peculiar hole it was really bright and beautiful. As I stood up it was a bit dizzy but it became more clear. When it became more clear it looked like this…. This world was an amazingly colorful. It had small stick kids and bigger stick adults. Of-course the girls wore a pretty dress and the boys wore a top with some shorts. They always had sunshine. At this point I totally forgot about my mission. A person called Demi-Leigh showed me her candy house and she showed me her favorite room which was the swimming pool. I never wanted to leave this awesome village. TO BE CONTINUED……..

        • My mission was too find an small color hole and explore the humongous city but I didn’t realize I was in the world already . Anyway I loved Demi-Leigh s swimming pool and could’t what to see all off her awesome and friendly friends. I also saw lots of her friendly living trees and plants also animals. One of her pet animals was a baby horse called pickle. He was extremely friendly and had the most coolest saddle ever seen. She also had a pet rabbit and he was called pepper and he was as bouncy as moon shoes. After that we looked and had a bit of fun we went to see her friend Dorcas and she was friendly and was a jolly friend. Then we played hide and seek and I won once and Demi-Leigh won twice and Dorcas won once. It was a awesome game.TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

          • After that we went to see Dorcas’s present house and I saw her Christmas tree up and it wasn’t Christmas until 50 days. They said it was Christmas in eight more days and they were extremely excited. I didn’t realise this but time was ticking and I needed to be back before 6:00 and it was two more hours before 6:00. I was having the best time I didn’t really want to leave my friendly friends. I didn’t really have any friends back at home because | am always saving the day and going to the forest
            on missions but that is what I would like to be an super hero. Next I met the king queen, prince, princess. They were both lovely people and they had a lovely place. The place was humongous with plan statures. There was pictures of old artist with an paint place. TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!

  10. As i walk in i think gely beans are going to atack and nible my flesh and then take me to there leader. I felt terrified my hands were shaking like mad . i see the king and he takes me away. as i enter the mistereus ……to be continued

  11. When I approached the spooky woods beacause I wanted to go on an adventure never the less I found an entrance I walked through. It looked amazing and I wanted to eat the choclate mushrooms but I didn;t know if they were poisinois or not. Then a jelly babbies chased me out I became TERRIFIED.

  12. You walk in to a brown forest and suddenly you find a tunnel. You started to walk into the tunnel then… WOW you see a mine craft land you start walking and then it scans you to see if you are a loud to come into mine craft land. I was allowed to go in so it was a new land so I got some wood and made a crafting table then I made an axe. Then a few days later I got bored and I went back to my house. The next day I went back into the tunnel and then… THERE WAS PEOPLE THERE
    I think there is people in there because I was getting lonely and we had a party and I’m going to tell you after to be continued…

  13. my world.
    when i walked into the palace it was magical. its a land known about the kindest and sweetest.lived in that land were 8 people a band, mrs millard, mrs fox and mrs sullivan…………..
    to be continued…

  14. when i walked in it looked dark and mysterios i felt a shiver on my shoulder it touched me carefully …

    TO BE CONTINUED…

  15. My story
    I walked and walked until…WOW. A deep dark tunnel was right in front of me . It was covered with posters that had people on them. I felt like I was trapped ,like i was alone without no one .I went through but I dident come out… I walked for 3 hours until all the lights came on .I saw lots of funny creaters but what were thay…

  16. As I open a book I get sucked in and then I get turned into a cow!Now I,m in animal
    mania and now I,m flaling my uder,s around!!

  17. once apoon a time there was a little girl called jessy she was specle the one day she was walking in a huge forist then she found a little tunnel then she wondered should I go in then she said yes I,m going in then she walked in
    to be countinued

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    • it was so cool because when he pushed a button and said where he whaned to go it comes?his bedroom had a bed with mice cuvers on and peelos on then we went to see mine masae she was cooking pie it smelled so nice.then Belle come and took me in her house it was fun she read me a story and we sang togever it was so fun then cindrella come a took me why i was saying good bye cindarella took me to her house i helped her whash up and driy food Anmles and i read to her she read to me i sang to her she sang to me i had fun but the funist thing was whith Belle

  18. As I walk into the forest I saw a sign saying outback shack it looked creepy and scary but I faced my fears and walked closer to it. Then I opened the door and walked inside it was pitch black but I managed to find the light. And then i saw loads of 1D things with all there albums and loads more . But then I felt a shiver on my shoulder it was like someone’s hand touching me I turned around it was the boys of 1D ZAYN,NIAL,LOUIE,LIAM,HARRY I screamed louder than I ever had before!!!

  19. Thay were half horse and half human.I SCREMED as loud as the tv up to 100.I ran and then I went out of the tunnel and I saw zombies, harry potter, wizard chest and loads more. I thought I was dreaming so I pinched myself but I was’ent Harry potter helped me learn magic spell’s and he helped me home .Before I did ,I played wizard chest (I won) I also played tag with the zombiesFinaly I went home.
    THE END
    BY HOLLY

  20. The mermaids love to design skirts.Suddenly a sea witch named split ruined there design area the mermaids were sad there king got angry and went to the sea witch house told the sea witch witch what she did the sea witch pretended she didn’t know what he talking about back the kings castle the princes and princess were in trouble the sea witch servants trapped them the whole kingdom were suffering.Back at sea witch is house the sea witch was asking the king to sit the king sat down the sea witch made the king tea and put poison inside…To be continued

  21. As i approached the tunnel i was terrified but as i entered i felt something good was going to happen.I ended up in a world made out of lego. There was a police station and everything you could dream of!In this dimension it smells like flowers,in England it smells like fire burning. I found an underground train station. I went on it,i ended up at the Northpole and i met Santa he is very fat also the elfs Tom,Jams,Rachel and hundred more. Santa told me i was on the good list and he gave me a football!!!I love footballs i have been making a collection for 4 years and that was the best day of my life…

  22. (India was great got to ride on a motorbike with a bullet)

    When my first footstep touches the ground, the whole place starts to rumble!!!
    Then, my second footstep touches gently dabs onto the crumbling orangatange fur – witch was a boobytrap aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    A cool shudder trickles down your spine. Glancing around nervously, you see somber portraits staring at you from behind layers of dust, seemingly penetrating your very being. Cold, hesitant light streams in through a cracked window, casting eerie shadows on the walls. As you walk forward, you can’t help but feel that someone is following you. Whirling around, you see nothing but the empty hallway and the faces in the portraits staring at you. ‘Turn back’ they seem to say, but you swallow a nervous whimper and continue into the dark bowels of the house! Yu then find out your trapped and abandoned! “Booooo Hooooo” After that, a portal appears out of nowhere and in my brain I get a sudden, yet mysterious urge to go through it!!
    I try to fight it but the gamma energy had tooken over my brain AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

    Now, I’m through the portal and I find out I’m part Hulk part Wolverine!!!!!

    TO BE CONTINEUD…….

  23. When my first footstep touches the ground, the whole place starts to rumble!!!
    Then, my second footstep touches gently dabs onto the crumbling orangatange fur – witch was a boobytrap

    A cool shudder trickles down your spine. Glancing around nervously, you see somber portraits staring at you from behind layers of dust, seemingly penetrating your very being. Cold, hesitant light streams in through a cracked window, casting eerie shadows on the walls. As you walk forward, you can’t help but feel that someone is following you.Whirling around, you see nothing but the empty hallway and the faces in the portraits staring at you. ‘Turn back’ they seem to say, but you swallow a nervous whimper and continue into the dark bowels of the house! Yu then find out your trapped and abandoned! “Booooo Hooooo” After that, a portal appears out of nowhere and in my brain I get a sudden, yet mysterious urge to go through it!!
    I try to fight it but the gamma energy had tooken over my brain

    Now, I’m through the portal and I find out I’m part Hulk part Wolverine!!!!!
    I’m in a / Zombie / Yeti / Bigfoot / Troll / Dino / Robot Apocalypse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  24. My first footstep has gone to the floor, my second one dabs on the orangatange fur and I fall into a deep dark deathly hole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    A cool shudder trickles down your spine. Glancing around nervously, you see somber portraits staring at you from behind layers of dust, seemingly penetrating your very being. Cold, hesitant light streams in through a cracked window, casting eerie shadows on the walls. As you walk forward, you can’t help but feel that someone is following you. Whirling around, you see nothing but the empty hallway and the faces in the portraits staring at you. ‘Turn back’ they seem to say, but you swallow a nervous whimper and continue into the dark bowels of the house…

    You enter a dark room in the center of the house. Shadows seem to swirl around your feet, sucking you in. In a burst of panic, you fumble for a light switch. You flip it up and down frantically, but the room remains immersed in darkness. Fear settles in and deep down you know you’re not alone in the dark. Something brushes your back. You turn, but there is nothing. Nothing you can see, that is. Outside you can hear the autumn wind howling, and it almost sounds like laughter to your panicked mind. A low chuckle breaks your thought process, directly in front of you. You scream, but hear nothing in the overwhelming blackness. You’re being drawn in, drowned in slumbering evil, there is no escape…

    You soon hear Demons and Devils lurking as loud as like they are next to you!!!!!!!!!!!
    Another black hole appears, the same kind you saw up on the Orange, Gloopy
    ape like fur!
    WHOOSH!!!!!!! You get sucked in first your belly then Head to Toe!!!!!!!

  25. Charlotte life

    One day there was a girl called Charlotte and she went to lings primary school and she had 2 sisters called Vicky and Natasha and she had a uncle who was so weird because he is so silly ever day.one day she went to school and she was so good at maths and all the things you give here she gets on with it all the time and she is a litter bit good at English because she don’t like English and her techer was mrs millerd and she like’s her techer so much. She had no one to play with her.

  26. My first footstep has gone to the floor, my second one dabs on the orangatange fur and I fall into a deep dark deathly hole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    A cool shudder trickles down your spine. Glancing around nervously, you see somber portraits staring at you from behind layers of dust, seemingly penetrating your very being. Cold, hesitant light streams in through a cracked window, casting eerie shadows on the walls. As you walk forward, you can’t help but feel that someone is following you. Whirling around, you see nothing but the empty hallway and the faces in the portraits staring at you. ‘Turn back’ they seem to say, but you swallow a nervous whimper and continue into the dark bowels of the house…

    You enter a dark room in the center of the house. Shadows seem to swirl around your feet, sucking you in. In a burst of panic, you fumble for a light switch. You flip it up and down frantically, but the room remains immersed in darkness. Fear settles in and deep down you know you’re not alone in the dark. Something brushes your back. You turn, but there is nothing. Nothing you can see, that is. Outside you can hear the autumn wind howling, and it almost sounds like laughter to your panicked mind. A low chuckle breaks your thought process, directly in front of you. You scream, but hear nothing in the overwhelming blackness. You’re being drawn in, drowned in slumbering evil, there is no escape…

    You soon hear Demons and Devils lurking as loud as like they are next to you!!!!!!!!!!!
    Another black hole appears, the same kind you saw up on the Orange, Gloopy
    ape like fur!
    WHOOSH!!!!!!! You get sucked in first your belly then Head to Toe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Now, I’m through the portal and I find out I’m part Hulk part Wolverine!!!!!
    I’m in a Zombie! apocolyspe!
    No, but at least that was what I thought it was……

    This giant beast came up out of nowhere! I did’nt know who or what he was but I did know one thing, his name was, Arax the Soul Stealer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Black wings outstrchted, the gigantic medival bat gleamed with pure evil!!!!!!!!
    As his red killer-like eyes met mine, he then curled his thin purple chapped lips
    into a venomous delight!!!!! The crinkled leathery skin was drawn tight over his face showing the sharp angles of the skull beneath!!!!!!!!!!!
    He tossed his head madly and I could see his twisted horns slice through the air!!!! One clawed fist was held over his prey in like a vice grip, in the other was the coal-black whip that he used to ensure his victims!!!! (prey)
    he then squeesed his ‘victim’ to DEATH!!!!!!!!!!

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